OK, OK, commas matter...

In my haste I've been less than diligent about grammar, punctuation, and whatnot.

A good friend and constructive critic has pointed out my need to be a wee bit more careful, as I'm guilty of the comma splice, and the run-on sentence, which considering the source (he of Cal English degree and an MFA from USC) is advice I should more closely heed: however, I'm an incorrigible smart-ass and reluctant to change.

So, my friend, I am heartily sorry for having offended the gods of good writing, and I firmly resolve with the help of their grace to splice no more and to avoid the near ocassion of splicing. 

Now, what's my penance?

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